Initial Statement: Pediatric cancer is more rendering to the life of that particular person because as a child one has not established a life or a meaning to self-fulfill. Mr. Martin Edit:
Not only battling the disease
pediatric cancer has a _ effect on a developing young person in terms of emotional and psychological development.
Ashley Edit:__ Pediatric Cancer has a drastic [devastating] effect on a developing young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development. Sounds better. You may still need to work with the wording a bit. Let's not repeat the word development.
Pediatric Cancer has a drastic effect on the growth of a young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development.
Initial Statement: Pediatric cancer is more rendering to the life of that particular person because as a child one has not established a life or a meaning to self-fulfill.
Mr. Martin Edit:
pediatric cancer has a _ effect on a developing young person in terms of emotional and psychological development.
Ashley Edit:__ Pediatric Cancer has a drastic [devastating] effect on a developing young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development.
Sounds better. You may still need to work with the wording a bit. Let's not repeat the word development.
Pediatric Cancer has a drastic effect on the growth of a young person in terms of both emotional and psychological development.